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MarioLuigiGCFan wrote: Creamercrumble7150 wrote: Crystalmoon101 wrote: what i think will happen is that the gang sneaked in to find karai where they found her last time and shredder knew they'd look here and mind controlled Raph our of no where Raph attacks Leo and Leo manages to escape tho

Leo heads back to the lair and explains what happened and this time Mikey and donnie comes (and maybe Splinter) they 4 head to shredders lair and face off against the foot and when they are done with the foot bots Raph, Tiger claw, Fish face and Razhar are next up but April and casey arrive. As the group are facing them Shredder throws mind control stuff at Mikey, Casey, April and Donnie

This is where i have two different parts of the story

1st different form of this story is that Leo is not mind control and is out number and then cornered which is when Shredder tells him to give up. Leo doesn't tho and jumps, pushes and slices his way through the group and heads over to attack shredder but Karai jumps into the way and attacks leo cause she two is being controlled. But during the fight Leo keeps trying so hard for her to remember who she is and it works. Shredder then jumps in and attacks Leo and they have a fight but Karai knows another way to stop this time control thing and that is with a very loud high pitch noise so she goes to start the fire alarm but as she is trying to her snake side keeps trying to turn her mind into a snake again and when Leo is about to be finished off she manages to turn on the fire alarms and the noise sets everyone free. As Shredder turns his back to Leo trying to figure whats going on Leo attacks him from the back and uses a smoke bomb to escape with everyone. When they head home karai had come to but doesn't seem to act like a snake anymore. Donnie uses some lab stuff and finds out that the mind control stuff had given her control over her brain again.

2nd version of the story is that if Splinter came Leo, Donnie and Mikey end up two getting controlled and the Shredder makes them fight Splinter but Splinter doesn't want to fight them and tries his best to dough them and see's that Baxter has a group of buttons that are used to control the turtles so he heads that way and gets past his sons one by one but when he gets up to Leo it seems he has to fight him as it harder to past him but Splinter say somethings that makes Leo hesitate and gives Splinter the chance to pass him. Splinter goes to turn off the control stuff but Shredder and him have another battle but Splinter manages to turn it off and the group escape

hope you like ^^ actually, the 2nd one is quite cool, I want that to happen, but I don't know that it will though, cool idea anyway

Here's mine: Creamercrumble7150 wrote: Crystalmoon101 wrote: what i think will happen is that the gang sneaked in to find karai where they found her last time and shredder knew they'd look here and mind controlled Raph our of no where Raph attacks Leo and Leo manages to escape tho

Leo heads back to the lair and explains what happened and this time Mikey and donnie comes (and maybe Splinter) <span style="color:rgb(44,54,53);font-family:Verdana,sans-serif;font-size:12px;">they 4 head to shredders lair and face off against the foot and when they are done with the foot bots Raph, Tiger claw, Fish face and Razhar are next up but April and casey arrive. <span style="color:rgb(44,54,53);font-family:Verdana,sans-serif;font-size:12px;">As the group are facing them Shredder throws mind control stuff at Mikey, Casey, April and Donnie

<span style="color:rgb(44,54,53);font-family:Verdana,sans-serif;font-size:12px;">This is where i have two different parts of the story

<span style="color:rgb(44,54,53);font-family:Verdana,sans-serif;font-size:12px;">1st different form of this story is that Leo is not mind control and is out number and then cornered which is when Shredder tells him to give up. Leo doesn't tho and jumps, pushes and slices his way through the group and heads over to attack shredder but Karai jumps into the way and attacks leo cause she two is being controlled. But during the fight Leo keeps trying so hard for her to remember who she is and it works. Shredder then jumps in and attacks Leo and they have a fight but Karai knows another way to stop this time control thing and that is with a very loud high pitch noise so she goes to start the fire alarm but as she is trying to her snake side keeps trying to turn her mind into a snake again and when Leo is about to be finished off she manages to turn on the fire alarms and the noise sets everyone free. As Shredder turns his back to Leo trying to figure whats going on Leo attacks him from the back and uses a smoke bomb to escape with everyone. When they head home karai had come to but doesn't seem to act like a snake anymore. Donnie uses some lab stuff and finds out that the mind control stuff had given her control over her brain again.

<span style="color:rgb(44,54,53);font-family:Verdana,sans-serif;font-size:12px;">2nd version of the story is that if Splinter came Leo, Donnie and Mikey end up two getting controlled and the Shredder makes them fight Splinter but Splinter doesn't want to fight them and tries his best to dough them and see's that Baxter has a group of buttons that are used to control the turtles so he heads that way and gets past his sons one by one but when he gets up to Leo it seems he has to fight him as it harder to past him but Splinter say somethings that makes Leo hesitate and gives Splinter the chance to pass him. Splinter goes to turn off the control stuff but Shredder and him have another battle but Splinter manages to turn it off and the group escape

<span style="color:rgb(44,54,53);font-family:Verdana,sans-serif;font-size:12px;">hope you like ^^ actually, the 2nd one is quite cool, I want that to happen, but I don't know that it will though, cool idea anyway

Here's mine: Shredder asks Baxter and Rahzar to go and steal some ingriedients to make Karai NormL but before they do they have to try and turn her back while Fishface and TigerClaw are with Hun trying to get some more cheezyballz for the mid control formula! However the Turtles are on night patrol to see if the Kraang have came back yet or any bad behavior on the streets but they see Tiger Claw and Fishface stealing from an abandon Kraang Base which has some equipment and tools for shredder's Formula! The Turtles break in but since Raph is too violent he jumps in at the wrong time but they find out that Hun and the Purple Dragons are back and Raph jumps in too early and gets captured! Mikey and Donnie decide to go to the Foot HQ while Leo goes in the mutagen room of the Foot Base and attempts to free Karai after finding out she was captured after overhearing it from Hun and Tiger Claw. They later go there but a bunch of Foot-Bot are guarding the Door they pass them! They 3 meet up and try to get Raph out by sneaking in by shutting off the power but since they expected the turtles because Fishface told Shredder, they have meet up with most of the Foot including Chrome Dome, Hun and the Purple Dragons! So it becomes a big battle between the turtles face there adversaris!

Leo Verses Tiger Claw

Donnie Verses Baxter Fly

Raph Verses Fishface

Mikey Verses Rahzar

After taking them out, they later fight some more Foot-Bots, defeat Fong, Sid and Tsio, take out Hun and find out that Raph is in a prison cell (Like Karai was in Season 2) and they free him out! But just as Shredder shoots a Mind Control Formula Needle at Karai, Raph sacrafises himself and jumps infront of the bullet and starts to get his mind controlled! Then all the villains, including Rahzar, Tiger Claw, Baxter Fly and Fishface! They all start to control Raph and torture him like telling him to hit himself (Fishface mocking him, saying "why are hitting yourself shellbrain") and control until Donnie finds a vile of retro mutagen and quickly does a mixture while all the villains have fun controlling Raph and trying to kill Leo and Mikey! While no one is looking, he takes Baxter Mixture that he and Rahzar worked hard on and pour it into the Retro Mutagen and put some Mind Formula into is and it hits Raph, turning him back into normal while they try to get away with Karai, Shredder try's to hit them again but Karai sacrafises herself and gets hit by Shredder! Leo, sad but with no choice, they have to leave without Karai again and quickly leave with Mikey saying "So long Shredhead" and leave with a smoke bomb fading them away! that idea's great too! I enjoy reading it