User blog:Creck555/The sewer asylum

"Leo how could you!" "Raph its not leo's fault!" "Oh really donnie he didn't bring splinters old foe to the lair" "Splinter wakey wakey...Splinter...SPLINTER WAKE UP!" "give it a rest mikey and donnie raph's right splinter's dead venus is captured the lair is destroyed and it's all my fault" "No its not le-" "




 * CUT THE CRAP DONNIE!!!!!!!" "sob! sob! Stop it you guys! splinter wouldn't want it like this!" "Shut i-" "he's right I never thought I would say this but mikey your right!" "You know what finaly leo screws up and its not his fault but When I screw up....Well I'm not gonna"(tears rush down raphaels face). "Its ok to cry some times raph look I agree it is my...F-f-.....(Leo and the others all start to cry). (Raph stops crying and is now angry) "YOU KNOW WHAT! THIS IS POINTLESS SPLINTER I'M GONNA MAKE YOU PROUD I'M GONNA GET VENGENCE!" "(sniff) How are you gonna do that!". "I know people too leo!" (raph leaps off on to roof tops away.

3 days earlier: "Your friends are here leo!" "thanks for telling me mikey!" "Gee! these guys seem li-BOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!! (all the turtles except for raph scream "VENUS!!!!!!"  as venus d

emilo is sent flying stait through the wall into raph's room and is knocked unconcius) "Venus nooo!" " AHA! I thought raph left even after he was grounded!" "Mikey that doesn't matter! I'm gonna go see if I can

find out what the heck the foot clan are doing you and donnie make sure venus is ok!" (Leo springs up in the air to the aproaching army as splinter falls to the floor and is given a vision of the night his misterious figure killed hisdaughter miwa and Tang Shen) " Hey guys whatthe heck where is the shredder I wanna talk to him!" (Another missile is fired from another soldiers rocket launcher but leo dodges it and it hits the wall sending blocks flying as if it were a game of jenga) " what the thats it!" (Leo begins beating foot soldiers left and right till he is knocked on the ground by a worthey oponent...The shredder!) "What these guys almost killed my si-(leo is cut by the blabe of the shredders armor and sent flying and slams into the wall while the shredder hesitates to kill him once he sees his old enemy) "You you killed my family how dare you you took my love my true love due to some petty game well its over now!" " Yes!"(the shredders voice is darkened and echos across the sewer even through the smashing of blocks sent flying as therockets are shot) "It ends because you'll finally DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (shredder and splinter en

gage in an epic battle until splinter knocks the foe to the floor and is about to end it when a rocket hits him and sends him flying into the hungry fire that eats and burns his body till it is a black bloody singed body) "YES!!!!" "Noo!" Leo leaps to jump at him but donnie stops him while raph is grabbed by mikey. then the two brothers carry the other two who are struggling trying to escape out of the fire) "Where's venus?! screamed raph!" "she's been taken by the foot!"

To be continued

Confused well I am currently playing the events backwords to add to the drama! The top paragraph will always be current. Also a warning this story is PG13.