Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-28655620-20161117184919/@comment-28655620-20171014040607

Amazoman wrote: Just as an example, here is a story i conceptualized for a 2012 show style introduction of Venus, and the story surrounding her. She was the turtle's sister from the pet store that Hamato Yoshi did not buy. Instead, she was bought by Dr. Perri Grey (from the archie comics), a veteranarian who gave her the name Venus de Milo. The turtles descover this and decide to have a family reunion of sorts, when Donatello gets an alert that Hun and the Purple Dragons are highjacking an armored car filled with Mutagen, and by sheer coincidence the car's rout will take it pass Dr. Grey's house. She takes Venus with her to observe from the shadows. The turtles battle Hun and his goons, knocking him into the cargo the Dragon's were atempting to steal, sending mutagen canisters everywhere (this accident also happend to mutate Hun into a turtle, but that's not important), including over Dr. Grey (who mutates into a Flying Squirrel she was caring for in her clinic) which causes her to drop Venus into the sewers, mutagen following. The Dragon's drive the unconsious mutant Hun away, the turtles tend to Perri Grey, and Venus mutates into humanoid form in the sewers, thinking that her "mother" was killed in the accident, and blaming the turtles for it (Like what happened to Slash, the mutagen messed with her mind). The episode ends with John Kommodus, CEO of Go-Kommodo Sports Manufacturing, and self-proclaimed Dragon Lord, is informed by one of his Rank that his mutagen was hijacked and that the entire payload was lost, including the "Special" cannister. We then cut to Venus in the sewers again, where she begins to glow with chi energy.

In the next episode of this mini-series, the Turtles begin looking for Venus in the sewers, but the Dragon Lord is also looking for her and the mutagen she "stole", sending his mutant Komodo Dragon brother, King Komodo, into the sewers to find her. But Venus is no longer in the sewers, she has been found by Chung I, a tai chi instructor. He has taken her in and promised to train her in his arts, both so she can channel her newfound Chi powers, and control her desire for vengence. Sense she dose not remember her old name, he gives her the name Mei Pei Chi (meaning Beautiful Turtle Mind). After learning decent control of her power, she becomes frustrated with Chung for attempting to quell her nead for revenge and goes into the seweres to look for the turtles. They meet and fight, the Turtles realize Venus's chi powers are too dangerous and bait her back to the lair where Dr. Grey is, waiting for Donnie's retromutagen to finish brewing. When she gets there Venus recognizes her "mother's" voice and tearfully reunites, becoming receptive to the turtle's explained backtory. The Dragon Lord has bean observing these events however and seeing how powerful Venus has become, he comes up with a new stratagey. The lights in the turtle's lair go out, King Komodo's roar is heard, and when the lights come up, the four male turtles and Dr. Grey are gone.

In the final of these episodes, Venus returns to Chung I to apologize and ask for help. She has received a telepathic messags from the Dragon Lord, ransoming her brothers and mother. Chung I tells her of the legend of the Dragons, who long ago held dominion over china, before a band of warriors hunted them to extinction. Before the final Dragon was killed, he emparted his essence into a pregnant village woman, causing her son to be born with Dragon esque featurs and powers. He laid waste to China, rulling with an iron fist. But as the generations moved on, and his Dragon bloodline was diluted with human DNA, his descendants lost power and were eventually overthown. Chung suspects John Kommodus to be the laest in this bloodline, and after hearing a description of the effects of Mutagen, they deduce that he wants to use a canister of ooze, enchanted with the essence of the dragon, to gain the power of his Dragon ancestors, and that canister was the one that Venus had been doused with. Venus invades the Dragon Lords stronghold, fighting Rank soldiers all the way, and finds the turtles and Dr. Grey attached to machinery. John Komodus explains that he no longer needs the mutagen in her blood, just the dragon magic she "stole". When questioned as to why, he siphons the mutagen from Perri Grey, returning her to human form, and causing John to become a humanoid dragon man, he intends to also drain the mutagen from the turtles. The two fight, and Venus exentually triumphs, using the retro-mutagen from donnie's lab to revert him to human and handing him an his Rank soldiers over to the police. Venus makes peice with her brothers, but tells them that she can't stay with them. She needs to forge her own path in life. So she has decided to go with Chung I to China to continue training. She says goodby to her family and walks off into the sunset.

How's that for a storyline. Pretty good. I had a similar idea to that with a fan made third sequel to the live TMNT Movies.