Thread:Mikael buonarotti/@comment-995426-20150405074540/@comment-995426-20150406034416

Okay, finished reading through Mikey's article. The attention to detail is good. I cleaned up or toned down a bit of speculation (though I'm sure I'm sometimes guilty of making blatantly speculative statements myself). So far the biggest issue is that some of the sentence components internally have a run-on flow (perhaps not enough commas), and sometimes ambiguous use of pronouns, etc. Little writing issues like that. (But I will readily admit I can be stilted with my choice of lexicon, cluttered in my stacking of adverbs, etc. When it comes to writing, we could all use more practice.)