Thread:Sapphire848/@comment-24488741-20140313105623

Hey, I came up with a short story and I tried to post it in the comments but my comment editior thingy wouldn't load so I decided to message you it instead, I hope that's okay. So without farther adieu, here it is....

Splinter: Let's see there are many stories, ah! How about the one where a certain turtle tot wet his shell? It was when my sons were about three years old, I had them eating a snack at the kitchen table. Rapheal was downing his fith juice box. He tried to get my attention but, I was busy cutting up some cheese. Donatello then dropped his cooking underneath Rapheal's chair and naturelly he got down to pick it up. I heard small whimpering sounds, turned around and saw Rapheal peeing on his brother. And let's just saw the smell did not come out of their shells for weeks.

So that's it. I hope it's not too long, I tried to keep it short. If you want to change anything you can. Other then that, I hope it's good enough! :) 