User blog comment:Leofan13/Title is a work in progress at this point.../@comment-24488741-20140302120602

Wow. This is really good, it kept me reading the whole time. I can't wait for the next chapter..or section...or whatever your gonna call it. I don't know if your dividing your story into chapters or just sections or something completely different. Anyway, really good so far, can't wait for more! :)