User blog:Love Mikey/Different detention Stories. Rise of the turtles part 1.

'''Have you ever wondered about a different demention of turtles? Maybe girl ones? Well this is your chance. This is my demention and version of Tmnt episode. Enjoy! First the characters.I do not own Tmnt.'''

'''Ok Well those are the turtles. Here are some others. '''

'''Splintra. The rat sensei. Tang shen.'''

Andy O'neil: The best friend and rookie ninja.

Cassidy Jones: Friend, and fighter, (Also tomboy)

Ice cream puppy: Boy pet.

Lina Bradford/Catpound: Milly's used to be friend turned into a cat.

Sheva/Fishgirl: Evil girl turned into Mutant fish.

Oraka Saki: Female shredder.

Eric: Aprils friend.

Ok now to start.

It started in the sewers.

Rhonda/Lilly/Milly/ and Donna were training.

'''Milly: Oh yea. Millicent is on the move! You don't know what to do! I'm here, i'm there. I could be anywhere!!! *Dodging lilly* How do you stop what you can't even see?!'''

Lilly: *Stabs in stomach with handle of Katana* Like that.

Milly: *On floor, out of breath* Good one lilly.

Donna: *Spins bo staff around*

Rhonda: *Cracks neck* Ok Donna, put down the staff and no one gets hurt.

 Donna: Uh you said that last time Rhonda, then you hurt me.

Rhonda: Yea but, less then I would have.

'''Donnie: Yea right. *starts fighting but Rhonda dodges every move*'''

Rhonda: *Grabs staff and breaks in two*

Donna: Should have dropped the staff?

'''Rhonda: *Smirking. In agreement* Should have dropped the staff. *starts hitting Donna with staff*'''

'''Donna: Ok, ok! I'm down!'''

Rhonda/Lilly: Get ready to fight.

LIlly: Onegai Shimasu.

'''Rhonda: Whatever you say. *Starts fighting*'''

Minute later.

'''Rhonda: *Grabs arm and flips* Ha! Nice try!'''

'''Splintra: YAME! You all did very well.'''

Rhonda: But i did better.

Splintra: This is about self improvent Rhondaky, It is not about winning and losing.

'''Rhonda: I know sensei. But I won and they lost. '''

Splintra: *Pinches painful pressure point

on Rhonda's neck*

'''Rhonda: Ah ah ah! But, whats really important is that we all did our best! (Crying) GOOD JOB EVERYONE!!! *Splintra lets go*'''

Splintra: Hehehe.

Theme song plays.

'''Teenage mutant ninja turtles! Teenage mutant ninja turtles! Teenage mutant ninja turtles! Heroes in a half shell! Turtle power!'''

'''Here we go its the lean green ninja team. On the scene, Cool teens doing ninja things. So extreme out the sewers like lazer beams. Get rocked with the shell shocked pizza kings '''

'''Can't stop these radicals teens. The secret of the ooze made the chosen few. Emerge from the shadows to make there moves. The good girls win bad girls lose.'''

'''Lillian she's the leader in blue. Does anything it takes to get her ninjas through. Donnaline she's a fellow has a way with machines. Rhondaky has the most attitude on the team. Millicent, she's one of a kind. And you know where to find her during party time. Master Splintra taught them every single skill they need to be one lean mean green incredible team.'''

'''Teenage mutant ninja turtles. Teenage mutant ninja turtles. Teenage mutant turtles. Heroes in a half shell. Turtle power!'''

Back to the show.

Everyone: *sitting at table eating algee and worms*

'''Milly: There's a little more algee and worms left if anyone wants it! Anybody? Anybody?'''

Lilly: No thanks.

Rhonda: I'm good.

Donna: All your's.

'''Milly: Well. I guess no one left room for, Cake! *Shows cake made of algee and worms*'''

Donna: It is a cake.

Rhonda:* dissapointedly* Made of algee....and worms.

Lilly: Whats the frosting made out of.

'''Milly: You don't wanna know. Happy mutation day!'''

Everyone: Happy mutation day!

'''Splintra: Ah yes. 15 years ago today, our lives changed forever and we became the unlikeliest of families.'''

Milly: Tell us the story master Splintra!

Splintra: Millicent, i have already told you many times!

'''Milly: Please! PLEEEASE!!! *Rhonda covers mouth*'''

'''Rhonda: Please. Its the only way to shut Milly up!'''

'''Splintra: *Sighs* Alright. Many years ago I was walking out the pet store with four baby turtles.'''

Milly: That was us!

'''Splintra: Yes. No interruptions! I passed a strange woman on the street. Something felt off about her. I decided to follow. I was discovered and fought them. When i did one of the woman dropped a canister of green ooze. Its splattered on me and you four. And we became who we our now. That was the beginning of our life together! It was the mysterious substance in this can that made us who we are today.'''

Milly: *Snatching container and hugging it* Dad!

'''Lilly: So sensei. Now that we're 15 I think we're finally ready to go up to the surface. Don't you?'''

Splintra: Yes....

Everyone else: YAY!

Splintra: And no. 

Rhonda: I hate when she does that!

'''Splintra; You have grown powerful. But you are still young. You lack the maturity to use your abilites wisely.'''

'''Donna: So sensei. Isn't that just no?'''

Splintra: Yes...and no. Wisdom comes from experience and experience come from making mistakes.

'''Donna: Aha! So in order for us to gain wisdom we have to make the mistakes so we can go!'''

Splintra: No.

Donna: And yes?

Splintra: *Sternly* No!

'''Lilly: Sensei. We know your trying to protect us. But we can't spend our whole lives hiding down here!'''

Splintra: *Thinks and looks down to see everyone doing puppy dog eyes then sighs* You may go, tonight!

'''Milly: Booyakasha! High three! *Everyone does high three*'''

Later in the living room of the sewer.

Lilly: Watching Space heroes.

'''Captain Rhyme on movie: Ms. Crankshine. Status report!'''

'''Crankshine: Status?! I'll give you the status! We're gonna blow up in two seconds!!! *Gets slapped in face bye captain Rhyme* Thank you captain.'''

'''Lilly: *Copying Captain Rhyme* Ladies, i have a bold and daring plan. There's no time for Hesistation, my orders must be carried out without question!'''

Rhonda: *Reading comic* You know this show is stupid right?

'''Lilly: Space heroes is a great show. and Captain Rhyme is a great hero. and someday i am gonna be just like her.'''

Rhonda: Well you do like to hear yourself talk so you'r on your way.

Milly and Donna run in room.

Milly: Its go time!!

All turtles: *Gets weapons ready*.

'''Splintra: You are going up to a strange and hostile world. You must maintain awareness at all times.'''

'''Turtles: Aye sensei! *goes to leave*'''

Splintra: Stay in the shadows!

'''Turtles: Aye sensei! *Goes to leave*'''

Splintra: Don't talk to strangers!

'''Turtles: Aye sensei! *Goes to leave again*'''

Splintra: Everyone is a stranger!!

'''Turtles: *Bored* Aye sensei. *Almost gets out door*'''

Splintra: Make sure to go before you leave, the restrooms up there are horrible!

Turtles: Sensei!

Splintra: *Sighs* Good luck my daughters.

Turtles: *Run out*

'''Splintra: LOOK BOTH WAYS BEFORE CROSSING THE STREET!!! *Sighs*'''

'''Up top. all the turtles walk out and look at the gross city.'''

Milly: Its beautiful!

'''Lilly: The city is just full of possibilities! There could be a adventure around this corner. *Looks at corner* Or this one! *looks at other one* There isn't but there could be!'''

'''Donna: *Looks in window* Look at all the computers! *Gasps* Is that the next generation cadmeum processor, quantum incryption?!'''

'''Rhonda: *sarcastic* I don't know Donnaline! Is it!?'''

Donna: It is!!

'''Milly: Guys guys! *Points at one of those light up moving windows* Check this out! A hand made out of light! Now its an eye! Now its a hand! Now it and eye! A hand! *Is grabbed on neck and dragged away bye Rhonda* THE EYE!!!'''

'''Donna: Where to next? '''

A pizza delivery motorcycle drives up.

Pizza delivery girl: *Stares at turtles* huh?

'''Rhonda: *Smirks*  OOGA BOOGA!! *Makes scary face*'''

Pizza delivery girl: *SCREAMS and drives off dropping a pizza behind.

'''Lilly: We're to exposed down here. Lets go to the roof. '''

'''Milly: Hmm? *Picks up pizza and brings it to roof*'''

Roof.

Milly: *Showing them pizza box* Pizzay.

Donna: Should we open it?

'''Lilly: Careful! It could be dangerous!'''

Rhonda: *rolls eyes and opens pizza box*

Donna: I think its food.

Rhonda: Its not like any food i've ever seen!

'''Milly: I'll try it. *takes out slice and takes bite. Brain explodes and then eats all* Its disgusting. You won't like it....I'll take the rest!!'''

'''Turtles: No way! *Fighting over pizza and going mmm*'''

Milly: I LOVE IT UP HERE!!

Later on roofs.

'''Turtles: *Running on roofs* OH YEA WOOHOO!!! *Stopping*'''

Lilly: Alright guys time to go home.

'''Donna: Wait look! *Points to teenage boy with red hair. Hearts appear in eyes* He's the most handsome boy i've ever seen!'''

Rhonda: Isn't he the only boy you have ever seen?

Donna: My point still stands!

'''Truck drives in front of teenage boy and his mother. Identical ladies and one gangster lady jumps out and grabs them.'''

Donna: We gotta save him!

'''Lilly: Splintra's instructions! Stay out of sight and bathrooms!!'''

'''Rhonda: I thought you wanted to be a hero! Since when do heroes ask for permission?'''

Lilly: They don't but..

'''Donna: Well i'm going! *Jumps down with Milly and Rhonda*'''

Lilly: *Sighs and jumps down*

'''Andy: HELP!! '''

'''Ms. O'neil: Oof! *Gets thrown in truck*'''

'''Rhonda: Hey! *Punches identical lady but it doesn't effect her* Still standing huh? I'll fix that. *Starts fighting them*'''

Everyone starts fighting but not as a team and the boy and his mom ends up getting taken.

'''Donnie: Ooh. Huh? *Sees boy in truck* THEY GOT THEM!!! *Lilly, Rhonda, and Donna run after the truck.*'''

'''Milly: *Groaning and getting up* Huh? *Sees identical girl* Oh yea?! You think your tough enough to stand up to my hot nunchuks of fury?! *Ties manriki around and pulls but can't pull her down. Then manriki is taken* I see. AHHH!! *Runs away screaming but is chased into an ally* PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!! *takes out other Manriki and accidently ties around ladies face then pulls down and half of face comes off revealing robot.* Huh? What in the!!! THAT IS WEIRD!! *Brain pops out of robots chest* AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! *runs around banging head. Brain finally jumps off and crawls away* Guys!! *Runs to sisters* Your never gonna believe this! That dudette! She had a brain!!'''

Lilly: We all have brains milly.

Donna: Not all of us.

Milly: IN OUR CHESTS?!

Lilly: No Milly, not in our chests.

'''Milly: YOUR NOT LISTENING!!! *Gets slapped bye Lilly* Did you just slap me?'''

Lilly: I was trying to calm you down!

MIlly: HOW IS THAT SUPPOSED TO CALM ME DOWN!!!?!

Donna: I think she's delusional.

'''Milly: Just. just. Come on! *Runs to alley but no one is there* Gone?! *Turns and looks at sisters who walk away. Walks with sadly* '''

Back in sewers.

Splintra: And so your inability to work together aloud them all to get away?!

Rhonda: Well maybe if i didn't have to waste time arguing with hero girl i could have saved them!

'''Lilly: Hey! If you hadn't gotten in my way, i could have done it! *looks at Donna* And you went flying off on your own! How smart was that?!'''

Donna: Well it would have worked if someone *turns to Milly* Hadn't tripped me with her Manriki!!!

'''Milly: Well.....None of this would have happened if.....Somebody hadn't trusted us to go out there in the first place!!! *Everyone looks at master Splintra.* Oh i'm sorry.'''

Splintra: No Millicent, you are right.

Milly: I am?

Others: She is?!

'''Splintra: You were not fully prepared for what was up there. I trained you to fight as individuals not as a team. And as your teacher, ur mother i am to blame. Perhaps in another year we can try again!'''

'''Donna: Another year?! Has everybody forgotten people were kidnapped!! They don't have a year!! We have to do something!! You weren't there! You should have seen the way that boy looked in my eyes he was scared and he was counting on me! Us!! To save him!'''

'''Splintra: *Looks at picture* Yes. You must save him!'''

Lilly: I agree sensei but in that fight we weren't exactly a well oiled machine.

MIlly: Like the robot with the brain thingy!

Rhonda: Give it up!

'''Splintra: Hmm. If you are to fight more affectively you need a leader.'''

Lilly: Can i be leader?!

Rhonda: Why should you be leader i beat you!

Donna: Ahem i am ten times smarter then the both of you!

'''Milly: I think i should be leader. *Everyone stares at her* I don't have a reason. I just think it would be cool!'''

'''Splintra: This is difficult. I will think about it. *Goes into room*'''

'''One second later. '''

'''Splintra: *Comes out* Its Lillian. *Goes back in.*'''

Lilly: No hard feelings right?

'''Rhonda: Ugh. *Storms out*'''

Later on a roof.

Milly: Explain to me one more time what we're doing here.

'''Lilly: That building has the same logo as the van! So one of the kidnappers will come out eventally! and when she does we will make her tell us where they took the prisoners! '''

Rhonda: How long should we wait?

Lilly: They will be here any second!

Two hours later.

Rhonda: SEE THEY AREN'T COMING!!

Lilly: Wouldn't be so sure!

Rhonda: They just pulled up didn't they?

Gangster girl: *walks out of van* 

'''Turtles: *attacks but loses. runs and hides behind a wall*'''

Lilly: *Does weird signs with hands*

Rhonda: *Does signs with hands while speaking* I don't know what this means!

Lilly: *Facepalms* Go around back!!

'''Milly: Just say that next time! *Everyone goes to back and kicks boxes away.*'''

A canister of ooze rolls out of van.

Milly: *Looks at* Dad?!

Episode ends.

SORRY ITS SUPER LONG PROBABLY ABOUT 22 MINUTES XD LOL SORRY AGAIN